This is awesome! The only thing I could think of is to change the snare to something more powerful and to make the hi hats shorter, but other than that this song is beast!!! I love the vibes and the chord progression as well as the story it seems to tell. Awesome work!!
Good song, a bit repetitive, try adding new melodies. also the blips at 1:01 are in a completely different key with the actual song, just doesn't mix well. Nice song!
Nice concept, needs a lot of work lol.
1.) Try not to leave percussion by its-self too much, unless its a pretty good beat (not solid quarter notes)
2.) I like what you tried to do with the 6/8 melody and the 4/4 drums, but it didn't quite work. Maybe turning the tempo up would help.
3.) I like your samples and instruments! Plus pretty good for a first track. Don't be afraid to experiment a little bit, just look over it and see where it needs improvement.
Overall, Good idea, 'Meh' for the outcome.
Hey light you were featured!
cool songz m8 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) bit too repetitive. Noice melody tho
RIP Lightbooster <3 u will be missed m9
how do u know dis lol
cool song ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Pros: A like the melody and drop! The snare is really powerful! The piano at 1:30 is really cool too. also the wobble bass at 2:00 is nicely made.
Con: at 1:13 the pitch bending goes weird with the chord progression, just doesn't mix too well.
Overall really well made! Really fun to listen to as well! Good job!
Okay gotcha about the Pitch, Thanks for telling me! It felt right but i guess it can also feel wrong.
Thank you so much!
Wish you good luck and make more nice songs :)
Why does it change key signature at the drop? still good tho
Yesss i know that, technical problems xD
noice m8 sounds like background music for a vlog or something
thnx dude :D
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